Promises to keep!!!

I love you and forever will

This to you time will tell

Untill then you tread your path well

And i will not in disappointment dwell

◄ Lost it!!!

Sleeping my pain away!! ►

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Do.RoThY

Fri 9th Aug 2019 10:55

I m glad you liked this poem Adam!!

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Do.RoThY

Fri 9th Aug 2019 10:55

Thank you Don for appreciating these verses!! I'm deeply touched by your concern.

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Don Matthews

Fri 9th Aug 2019 08:36

Give me short succint poem like this packed with meaning any day Adam. A well-thought-out haiku achieves the same effect. To me.

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Adam Rabinowitz

Fri 9th Aug 2019 06:06

I had to read it 4 times and each time brought new insight into meaning. Such a powerful little poem. I have to go yammering on and on to get anywhere near this much meaning.

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Don Matthews

Thu 8th Aug 2019 23:43

That's my girl.....

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