Lost it!!!

I'm hurt broken and shattered

I just can't write anything

 

I'm crying, falling and failing

I just can't fly anymore

 

I'm sad, depressed and in pieces

I just can't walk anymore

 

Smile is a hard thing to carry

Lips are tired and extremely weary

 

Laughter is an uneasy pinch

Heart is heavy to feel anything

 

Dismay, disappointment and dejection

Thoughts forlorn and gloominess all along

 

Bring me hope

Bring me love

Bring me peace

Bring me everything

For i have lost it all

 

◄ Flickering hope!!

Promises to keep!!! ►

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Do.RoThY

Fri 9th Aug 2019 13:24

Thank you Rose🌷😊

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Rose Casserley

Fri 9th Aug 2019 10:58

thing is Do.rothy, keep writing regardless, and remember, you are among WOL world friends.


So there! 😊





Rose 💋

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Do.RoThY

Fri 9th Aug 2019 10:53

Thank you Don for this funfilled poetic tease and consoling verses. I hope to do better but there is something missing or may be someone!!!

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Don Matthews

Thu 8th Aug 2019 23:30

Disappointed
Badly hurt
Don't like these
Around you girt

😛

Hope the disa-
Pointment's gone
Hurt's healed up
Dusted, done

😛

You know me
Always want
To write poems with
Laughter font

Ho ho

😛

Smiling yet?.....

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Do.RoThY

Thu 8th Aug 2019 18:01

Thank you Jon for the heart!!

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 8th Aug 2019 17:51

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Do.RoThY

Thu 8th Aug 2019 17:31

Hey Don, thank you for your wicky whacky haiku, ur poems do make me smile mostly. Thank you for your efforts. I am Just disappointed n too badly hurt.

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Do.RoThY

Thu 8th Aug 2019 17:29

Writing this didn't make me feel any better. I had a great day. Thank you Adam. I will read the poem thank you. May b i feel better reading that.

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Do.RoThY

Thu 8th Aug 2019 17:27

Hi Jason, that is so true!! Thanq.

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Don Matthews

Thu 8th Aug 2019 00:40

DoRoThY

Here's a little haiku
To help you brighten up
Don't like you feeling down-like
Must fill your brightening cup

Haiku is easy
Just write down dribble drabble
Shows you deep thinker

You are privileged D. Preview before anyone else see it.

Gotta smile now?..........

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Adam Rabinowitz

Wed 7th Aug 2019 16:10

If you feel this way...it makes me sad...but I hope that writing this made you feel better. I try to write to make myself feel better...sometimes it works, other times I have to write some more. Even more than writing though sometimes I feel better reading other human beings words since connection makes us all stronger. Hope you have a great day.

Hopefully later I will put a poem that speaks of hearts but I put one called Thank You on already today (it made me feel better to write it) and I have been cautioned about adding too quickly in regards to folks seeing the entries.

A.

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 7th Aug 2019 12:46

A heart is like a postcard, meaningless until it's been written upon.

J. x

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