Departure postponed

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Are you up yet? 

 

I’m on my second cup of coffee

 

The rolling news is reversing over me

 

Making sure I’m brain dead

 

 

Time zones steal you from me

 

You’re either sleeping or drinking

 

While I’m waking

 

and shaking and wasteful thinking

 

 

And now the neighbours have arisen

 

Tiny elephants ascending and descending

 

these walls as thin as dead zone atmosphere

 

its all or nothing with the company round here

 

 

You’ll traverse the river on your way to work

 

I think of the bow of your day cutting the waves

 

Then feel the tethers of my own dry dock existence pulling

 

The ropes are fraying and soon I’ll sail

 

◄ Confronting entropy

The hatred of poetry ►

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Wolfgar Miere

Thu 25th Jul 2019 19:10

Thank you Tom and Ray,

Tom, the "reversing over me" line really seems to sum up rolling news for me, it is rarely positive and therefore it seems to me that as opposed to rolling forward it reverses up over the listener/viewer ensuring the damage is properly inflicted...this to me portrays it in its more negative and truthful light.

By all means take anything I say and use it...everything is stolen even if not consciously.

I was relatively pleased with the last three lines as they can be taken in different ways, we can choose to cut the tether or simply wait until time takes its course, either way we still have choice. It is neither overtly pessimistic or optimistic when read with an open mind.

Thanks again.

David.

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raypool

Thu 25th Jul 2019 17:23

All part of the diurnal journey. So much to like authentic to the letter. Top gear the last three lines. Beautiful.

Ray

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Tom

Thu 25th Jul 2019 15:06

Also... "The ropes are fraying and soon I’ll sail" is such a perfect phrase. I will try not to steal it...

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Tom

Thu 25th Jul 2019 15:03

A sobering thought indeed. I really like this David, time really is our enemy. I loved the line "The rolling news is reversing over me" - I feel that 😃.

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Wolfgar Miere

Wed 24th Jul 2019 10:57

Thank you for the likes folks.

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Wolfgar Miere

Mon 22nd Jul 2019 17:57

Thanks Martin,

I have one or two true freinds out there in the world, many of them live in different time zones and some beyond communications.

I was thinking that time may not always allow me to say farewell to them due to such circumstances.

A sobering thought.

David.

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Martin Elder

Mon 22nd Jul 2019 09:26

A well thought out piece of poetry David with the whole concept of setting sail for two parties seemingly in two different times zones. There are many fine lines here, but I think the one I like the most is


'I think of the bow of your day cutting the waves'


Nice one

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