oiled and watered immortalizations

the arrangement was for her and her and her

to be the artistic inspirational

flesh suppliers

their beautiful fully naked forms

portrayed so life-like that,

even the most damning of critics

would have almost expected them

to step out of the painting.

◄ when meandering ended

tender deluge ►


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Rose Casserley

Mon 22nd Jul 2019 14:47

must be great to be great and live forever like the beauts in the poem or in any other form of being remembered forever, film stars etc.

Leon ( met you part way re your ?? )

while you all may not live forever I hope it's long enough to fulfil
your ambition's, like one that I have, of winning the ! lottery! ?

Rose ?

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Mon 22nd Jul 2019 13:08

loved it-one suggestion re alteration to the title-immortalities?

as in-their- beautifully naked forms

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Don Matthews

Sun 21st Jul 2019 22:51

So good Rose.....

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Martin Elder

Sun 21st Jul 2019 18:31

I love that line
'flesh suppliers' wonderful.
A lovely poem Rose good to see you are still on form
Nice one

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