Answers awaited!!

The mind is torn apart

Swinging along two ends

Finding answers

Uncertainities hound

Will it be, won't be?

A wild guess rakes the constructs

Gentle reply would suffice

Incase the answer comes straight

A roar from lion's mouth

Like a merry-go-round mind circulates

Time passes by,

unanswered thoughts

Playing hide and seek game

Will it be, won't he?

If only he would reciprocate.

 

◄ All things end in their perfect time!!!

Back to work!!! ►

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Do.RoThY

Fri 5th Jul 2019 12:32

Thank you Devon!! I appreciate your comments, i am glad you like my poems. 🌷

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Devon Brock

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 21:43

"a wild guess rakes the constructs" is such a stellar line. Given that there are a number of definitions of the verb - that line is particularly dense with meaning.

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Do.RoThY

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 17:26

Thnx Leon.....your marking much appreciated.🌷

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LEON STOLGARD

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 17:11

👍-10/10

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