time-wise

beginning ends

when the end begins

we all know that

it could be worse

it could be better

it makes me despair for the worst

it makes me hope for the better

these opposites are interlaced with sorrow

interlaced with peace

why I don't know

I must find out

before the end begins

◄ such as ethnic cleansing's

mettle ( yeah! and me too! ) ►

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LEON STOLGARD

Fri 21st Jun 2019 10:25

And big thank's for a very very nice comment Martin plus the same for Lisa, Mona, Do.Rothy and A/F/A/M.

Not forgetting-

Don Matthews
who I give thankful dues
for taking time
to compose a rhyme
a kindly commenting chap
for who my hands do clap
I just hope he doesn't find
my rhyme is a load of c**p!

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Don Matthews

Thu 20th Jun 2019 14:08

Play on words
Beginning End
On my screen
Both ascend

Interplay
Intertwine
Clever use
Very fine....

mona s

Thu 20th Jun 2019 11:22

Marvelous interplay of words.. Really enjoyed this..

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Martin Elder

Wed 19th Jun 2019 20:50

A very very clever use of words and phrases here Leon.

Nice one

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