in awe of poets uniqueness

 

 

She only has to write a few poem fuelling lines

and already they are powerful enough to send a rocket to the moon. 

 

She pens one last full stop

and the enormously winged masterpiece

leaves the runway

on its never-ending flight.

 

She composes so much deeper

than those who flounder in the shallows.

When her mind goes hunting

it aims at a landscape of thoughts

and with just one trigger pull

brings down a mountain range of poetry.

 

She sometimes though rarely

ploughs up the dead seeds of a fruitless idea.

When the land is cleared, replanted

better fertilized

what orchards of magnificent abundance

rise with perfection.

 

 

 

◄ fair views and fair do's

my morbid phases ( deaths daily arse kicking of life ) ►

Comments

Profile image

Rose Casserley

Tue 28th May 2019 17:19

ta very much for the likes and inspiring comments folks-

Martin 👍
Mona 👍
Vautaw 👍
P&S 👍
JJ 👍
Jason 👍
Jennifer 👍
KJ 👍
Lisa 👍


Jems, I agree with your choice of poets on wol but there again I think virtually all of the guys and gals on wol do a great job without any doubt. You will all see I have changed a word in the title to 'awe' which really was the obvious choice...dohhhh! 😀



Rose 💋

Profile image

Jemima Jones

Tue 28th May 2019 10:15

Rose, I'm truly amazed at the quality of this stupendous poem, but I'm wondering who it refers to? With respect, I can't recall anybody on WOL that I think writes with the same unique power you describe apart from the likes of Laura Taylor or Cynthia Buell Thomas. Answers on a postcard, please! Thank you. Jemima.

Profile image

Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Mon 27th May 2019 17:12

unbelievably brilliant Rose! this is the best poem you have ever done.

P&S xx

Profile image

Vautaw

Mon 27th May 2019 01:58

Beautiful. Orchards of magnificent abundance... a poet’s dream!

mona s

Sun 26th May 2019 18:47

Oh, so beautiful.. Poem's journey culminates so nicely..

Profile image

Martin Elder

Sun 26th May 2019 18:34

I love the fact that you are never one for understatement Rose. There are some great lines here

and with just one trigger pull
brings down a mountain range of poetry.


Love it

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message