True Love

True love-
something few will ever know
It is not what you think-
clouds of fluff and
unicorns colored pink

True love-
an ache which fills the heart
Taking over body and soul
without him or her
you will never be whole

True love-
consumes your existence
Feelings of happy and sad
Unpredictable, uncontrollable
being in love is not a fad

True love-
makes you feel sick
It's not all glitter and gold
but if you find true love
together you'll grow old

True love-
comes only once
To none does it compare
It won't be an easy ride
but have faith in it, if you dare

 

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 11th May 2019 23:08

Yes, we're 25 years next year, and I can confirm all of the above. Lovely poem Jane.

J. x

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 11th May 2019 22:20

Beautiful, Jane. Let's continue to believe in love in its many forms.

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Vautaw

Sat 11th May 2019 19:15

This poem would make a beautiful inscribed wedding gift! A great reminder that true love is more real than fantasy! 💕

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keith jeffries

Sat 11th May 2019 16:46

Jane,

Now I am a true fan. This poem is an appraisal of what love between two people is really about. My partner has been away for ten days and returned yesterday. Your poem rang more bells than a cathedral bell tower. O how I love him.

Thanks as always.
Keith

mona s

Sat 11th May 2019 15:50

Lovely enchanting poem.. Capturing the essence of true love so well..

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Dorothy Webb

Sat 11th May 2019 15:15

Just beautiful - very true - i love it.

Dorothy

P.S, My husband and i have been married for sixty years - true love never goes away - it just gets stronger.

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