Out of his reach

One for the ladies...  You can grab it if you 'Like'

To Vawtar  Thank you so much for reciting this.

 

Out of his reach

 

When we first met, it was like ‘Fifty shades of grey’

Those sweet nothings you whispered, I would swoon as you say

When sex was like a marathon, lasting all-night

In so many positions, me holding you tight

 

Brazilian, vagazzled, gone was the thatch

The way you tipped velvet, no man could match

When a six-pack meant abs, Adonis would die for

Those were the days, when we always wanted more

 

Now the six-pack a belly, like a barrel full of beer

As the alcohol dissolved all our love, I now fear

Sex now is more like Formula 1

Half a lap round ‘Brands Hatch’ so quickly you cum

 

Foreplay was ecstatic, whilst just kissing my neck

My nectar would start flowing, completely automatic

Your lingam lit my fire we were the perfect match

Till your idea of foreplay, was to spit on my snatch

 

Huffing and puffing breath stinking of whiskey and fags

Squashed by your weight and those man boobs that sag

Now you’re back in to rehab laying on a cold lonely bed

The words ‘darling I love you’ words no longer said

 

Your wand that stood proud, now limp in your hand

Reading this letter, I doubt you will ever understand

I have found a new lover who loves me…  I have found who I am.

Me and her smiling together, this beautiful, sensual, gorgeous, woman.

                                                                                                         Po

#alcohol #inlove #helpless #hurtlesbian marriage

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Comments

poemagraphic

Sat 19th Jan 2019 18:07

We did it Vautaw!

I am so pleased with our end result,,, which far outweighs the sum of the two parts.

But then I would say that ;0)

Po

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Vautaw

Fri 18th Jan 2019 01:56

With this piece, you tapped into the reality of many relationships, including mine. Those last two lines... Powerful. The upside of celibacy! I would be happy to record it for you. It would be my first time, virgin territory. 😉

PS, I appreciate your comments about different titles and endings. I can relate to the frustrating, time-consuming process of revising. I much prefer when it forms perfectly the first time, but that rarely happens.

PPS, I am curious about the deleted scenes!

Dolly L.

Tue 15th Jan 2019 14:16

I hv recoded this poem of yours in my voice a candid effort. I just wanted to see how it sounds.
Of course a great poem in all sense.
Many will be shy to audio record this. I hope you find your lucky angel soon.

poemagraphic

Sun 13th Jan 2019 19:30

HELP NEEDED PLEASE!

Are there any women here in WOL land who would like to recite this poem for me please.

I would love to add this to my audio list, however I would adore to have a women read this with all the intonations in all the right places.

Any volunteers please pm me here

Or email: poemagraphic@poetic.com

Thank you all in anticipation

Po

poemagraphic

Sun 13th Jan 2019 03:22

Katie Thank you so much for that comment.

I had a different ending that was even more sad.

Then I changed it, because life is sad enough for some people already without any help from me ;0)

I am glad you liked it

Po

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Sun 13th Jan 2019 03:13

Good write -made me feel sad( in a good way ) xxx

poemagraphic

Sat 12th Jan 2019 18:20

Oh! I hope so MC, I hope so.

Po

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 12th Jan 2019 16:19

Ooer...stimulating stuff.
Is life's compensation lust
On the way down to dust?

poemagraphic

Sat 12th Jan 2019 09:56

Don your little ditty says volumes about our musings of late old mate.

Glad you enjoyed it

Po

poemagraphic

Sat 12th Jan 2019 09:52

jon thank you for all your flowers.
As always, your presence is like a pearlescent translucent shadow my friend

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Don Matthews

Sat 12th Jan 2019 03:45

Ah yes Po I understand
How far should I dive?
Will the reader I upset?
My message must arrive

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Big Sal

Sat 12th Jan 2019 02:10

Always.

poemagraphic

Sat 12th Jan 2019 02:02

Hi Big Guy You always give such insightful comments.

I am so pleased you enjoyed this and have inspired me in the past and have now given me some more thoughts on other poems yet to come this year.

You have summed up exactly what I set out to do with this

It was a balancing act, deleting a whole quatrain that went just a tad too deep. and rewriting the last couplet which is quite 'rear' for me to do.

I also have three different titles for this poem.
Plus two different endings.

I settled on 'Out of his reach' because it has several connotations

Thanks for your support
Po

poemagraphic

Sat 12th Jan 2019 01:51

Do I was a little apprehensive about how far to dive (excuse the pun) Your comment is very warming thank you for the compliment.

I would like to find somebody to narrate it for me I think.

I am quite pleased with the end result.

As I was writing this I had no idea where it was going to end.

Po

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Big Sal

Sat 12th Jan 2019 01:16

Daaamn, what a beast!

One of your absolute finest. It is this stuff Po, that people love to hate and hate to love.

Each line is carried with finesse, and you weren't bawdy or indulgent either. You said each one with purpose. Nothing out of place.

Let's all hope your upcoming book is carried with such wings.🙌

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 12th Jan 2019 01:14

Your feminine side......😜.....is so so close to reality...i shy off from leaving a comment on the other lines of your poem.
As for me the first two and the last two lines are simply heart touching.....extremely sensual write up Po😍
50 shades of Po......👍

poemagraphic

Sat 12th Jan 2019 00:44

In touch with my feminine side

ENJOY

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