FREEZING TIME

FREEZING TIME

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wish I could freeze time in my freezer

and thaw it out when I need a bit more.

If I could, then one thing is for sure

I’d very soon need a new door.

 

With all of that opening and closing

I know that I’d soon wear it out.

It would get lots of use that’s for certain

Of this, there cannot be a doubt.

 

For some times I’ve plenty to spare

and at others, I find I’ve run out

As when I look down at my watch

I find that there is just none about

 

It’s funny how we still keep on looking

Expecting some more to appear

So you see it would be rather handy

To have some in the freezer to spare!

 

                                                           Po

Posilly rhymetimewhat if

◄ The Ballard of Jack and Jill

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poemagraphic

Wed 9th Jan 2019 17:23

…" You can not touch the same water twice"

Omg Ghaz, That is the most profound thing I have seen written for many a year!

Thank you for your kind comments as always.

I will pm you later

Po

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Ghazala Lari

Wed 9th Jan 2019 11:57

winding people up in hindi is translated as "logon ko chabi bharna"...which means to excite someone that they stand for you in all circumstances and hold your views as best... tz a hindi proverb....lol!!! (no pun intended here)😈

this poem tells us the value of time, which we just waste, regardless of its importance in our life.😎

"time and tide wait for none"😋
"you can not touch the same water twice"😌

well written....👍

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 9th Jan 2019 07:48

Great poem, Po.

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lisa donohoe

Wed 9th Jan 2019 01:49

We are all given the exact same 24 hours.. How we use it varies.. so precious and fragile and yet always taking for granted.. What a fantastic read po 😃

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Wed 9th Jan 2019 01:22

Great rhythm and rhyme- I couldn't agree more, there's never enough time! Well done😊

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Big Sal

Wed 9th Jan 2019 00:15

If time were a fart, you're damn well I'd jar that shit and freeze it until Hell itself thawed.

Just saying. 😅

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Don Matthews

Tue 8th Jan 2019 23:22

I like this 😎

poemagraphic

Tue 8th Jan 2019 22:22

Thank you for liking my poem Keith and your support.

Po

poemagraphic

Tue 8th Jan 2019 22:21

as in winding the clock Do that's the key (pun intended)

Po

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Ghazala Lari

Tue 8th Jan 2019 21:41

Winding.....as you wind the clock....or winding as in closing?? The lol seems to relate the first, if you cud enlighten me

poemagraphic

Tue 8th Jan 2019 21:38

Maybe I'm just winding people up Do LOL

Time is fluid, not linear

Po

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Ghazala Lari

Tue 8th Jan 2019 21:33

Freeze and thaw leads to disintegraton...a geographical process...it just clicked as i read your poem.
A great write dear Sir. I like your poems and the deeper meaning it holds. I wish icould freeze few moments from my past too... But looking forward to have better times in future. 👍

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