the deepest sleep

The deepest sleep


 He had been sleeping deeply

 woke up tried to be awake before the sleep

 took him into the depth of death.

He struggled to open his eyes, couldn`t.

Knew he had to make it, was able

to put one foot on the floor, the coldness

of the floor made him open his eyes.

He inhaled intensely it had been a close call

had he slept five minutes more

It had been too late.




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<Deleted User> (19913)

Sun 30th Dec 2018 12:20

My favourite of yours so far Jan. Some great lines in here. Happy New Year. Cheers, Kate

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