YOU

The following poem  “You” is the completion of my very first trilogy.

The first poem being    “Parts of me”

The second    “Heart broken”

(The use of two words is intentional.)

 

Although posted here at WOL in a relatively short time, these three poems were written several years apart.

 

YOU

Roadworks roadworks in my mind

Excavations’ deep to find

To what’s all this subsidence due?

 

Digging deep, discovering you.

Hid away from my view

Corroding, eroding, as you do

 

Surface now good as new

No more roadworks…

                                  No more you!

 

                                                     Po

emotional abusemental abuseMental Freedomparting is bitter sweet

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Sun 30th Dec 2018 12:57

Hi Kate

The emotional blackmail is the hardest hitting, as it is 'others' who feel the hurt and never ending pain.

Thank you for commenting and your continued support.

Po

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Sun 30th Dec 2018 12:22

Fantastic Po, and I can relate
Nothing quite so undermining as a toxic relationship.

Cheers, Kate

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poemagraphic

Sun 30th Dec 2018 11:32

Ghaz my friend great to hear your insight.

Time is the greatest healer!

Indeed Ameen G

Po

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Sun 30th Dec 2018 11:29

Don Thank you very much for your comment.

Sometimes when we let our guard down the smallest word has such power to wield great hurt.

The first cut is the deepest... but the rest still filp'n hurt mate.

Nice to hear from you

Po

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Sun 30th Dec 2018 02:03

The sequel.....separation and break ups are hurting and damaging.....nicely expressed....may Allah blesses everyone with true love!!! Ameen

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Don Matthews

Sat 29th Dec 2018 21:46

This is very good ?

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