My sister

Pre-amble: for my contribution to this week's Saturday Rhymers theme "sisters" - my first(ish) attempt at a cinquain.

My twin
Born the second
Youth spent resenting it
Now you outshine me in all things
You win

cinquain formSaturday Rhymers ClubsistersistersSRC

◄ Keep moving

My Brexit Poem ►

Comments

Profile image

Becky Who

Mon 17th Dec 2018 07:30

Sorry it was all I had time for. I'm also practising different forms of poetic expression. If some of my poems look long it is because they are written for the stage and it's got to be worthwhile psyching oneself to go up those steps...

Profile image

Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 23:02

This is very short and to the point for you Becky. But none the less very effective and quite a teaser
nice one

Profile image

Don Matthews

Sun 16th Dec 2018 03:12

MC raises an interesting
Question who is what?
Would she be What? I know you're Who
Oh gosh, my poem's shot 😎


Profile image

Don Matthews

Sun 16th Dec 2018 03:06

Nice cinquain Becky 😎

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Sat 15th Dec 2018 21:19

Twins can live a double life, can't they?! But I don't envy them. it's
hard enough being the youngest in a large family.
As for working out who is what - I reckon you have a twin called Rebecca What. Am I right...or what? 😊

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 15th Dec 2018 18:30

I enjoyed this Becky your comments make it more intriguing..💕

Profile image

Brian Maryon

Sat 15th Dec 2018 18:26

My older brother resents me...I know it.

It all started I think when he found out he doesn't have a middle name and I do.

Profile image

Becky Who

Sat 15th Dec 2018 13:38

Challenge: work out which bits are true and which bits are poetic licence.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message