Bats

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There are Bats thereabouts in the house

they are really no more than a mouse

they sleep upside down

so their smile is a frown

their protection I wholly espouse

◄ Put the leaves back on the trees

Variable Morality ►

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Wolfgar Miere

Tue 18th Dec 2018 14:58

Thanks Ray,

Limericks eh! who'd have thought.

Cheers pal,

David.

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raypool

Wed 12th Dec 2018 12:12

Quite batty David. It's satisfying getting a limerick together as it has built in humour, but your version is slightly disturbing to make us think. I'm thinking of vampires for example. Your comment is a revelation in itself!

You may remember Screaming Lord Sutch with his recording of "There's a moose loose aboot this hoose."

Ray

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Wed 12th Dec 2018 09:55

Love it. 😂😂😂

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Wolfgar Miere

Mon 10th Dec 2018 20:55

Thanks so much chaps.

I don't think this conforms to be honest, oh well neither do I.

Listen if you want a laugh click on this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDdfOFNrEGM

David.

PPS, I love bats too Kate, and those who dare to be different or who just are different, they are the people who change things and move us forward.

Kate G

Mon 10th Dec 2018 20:42

I love bats. 😀

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 10th Dec 2018 18:57

😂

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racha chafik

Mon 10th Dec 2018 18:39

great poem i love it it just flows nicely

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