Heart broken

Heart broken

Pumping, pumping, pumping... Still !

Iron in blood, iron in will

Strongest pump that’s ever made

Yet so fragile, I’m afraid

Easy broken just word

This is it,    have you heard...




#brokenheart #lovelost lovePo

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R and R ►



Sat 5th Jan 2019 10:30

crumbs another double dose of flowers this morning.

I have been touched deeply by the support and comments received by some many here at WOL. I have been trying to catch up on old posts to say thank you.

I have got to get my nose back to the grind stone next week and am glad to have spent this time on leave seeing how much my poetry has been seen and appreciated.

Written comments are not always needed a simple 'like' is often enough.... However when other poets take time out to make their feelings known it is humbling.


Fri 14th Dec 2018 22:51

Hi David. Nice comment thank you.


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David Irvine

Tue 11th Dec 2018 09:19

'Iron in the blood, yet so fragile'. A great descriptive piece offering the reader vivid imagery.


Mon 10th Dec 2018 20:40

Hi Racha often less is more!
Thank you for your comment.

I love your pic btw... I feel a poem about halos drifting in my mind;)


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racha chafik

Mon 10th Dec 2018 20:09

great poem i read it three times its so short yet has alot to say , so beautiful


Mon 10th Dec 2018 15:39

Hi Nigel thanks for dropping in and giving this a thumbs up.



Mon 10th Dec 2018 15:15

Hello Taylor it is so nice to hear your comments.

btw. I adore your newest pic.

I am soo pleased to have discovered this oasis of love, support and camaraderie here at WOL.

It gives one a feeling of belonging, in a world that can be very lonely at times... even in the most crowded of rooms.

Physically and perhaps more importantly these days virtually.

So many young hopes and dreams are dashed in cyberspace.

It is up to us ancient ones to lift the damaged youth to greater heights. I have pointed a few in your direction, I pray you don't mind.

I have found that most here tend to lead by example.


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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 10th Dec 2018 15:03

Our hearts are so fragile..yet strong..Beautiful Po xx


Mon 10th Dec 2018 13:47

Hi guys thank you to everyone who has liked this.

recently penned from a long lost (thankfully) memory.


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Mon 10th Dec 2018 10:40

Keep pumping, every effort you put in will show results later. What you think looks fragile, is many lean n thinz dream to build.. Dont be heart broken, be confident....keep going with a happy heart.....all the best💪💪💪 n yes keep pumping.....lol!!!😄


Mon 10th Dec 2018 08:28

Anya and Jon thank you both for the thumbs up! Plus your continued support which is always greatly appreciated.

It is a nice start to my day, thanks again.
Glad you liked it.


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