It's all in my head

 

Many a candle has shed a lonesome tear

At the sound of a quill, on the parchment of despair

Only being witnessed by introspective surmise  

Sealed within his cranium, the poets reprise

                                                                                  Po

◄ A stich in time

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poemagraphic

Fri 30th Nov 2018 22:39

Thank you Ray

Gothic Mmmm! What a constant source of imagery for us.

I do feel that an image or two adds to the feel at times, as some people aren't that proficient in the land of the imagination... or the image nation as I often call it.

I also think that as many here at WOL have discovered a few sound bites can add to the form.
I might record a few poems to accompany the written word

Often my rhymes need the nor folk accent to actually rhyme :0)

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raypool

Fri 30th Nov 2018 22:25

I find this endearing, a sort of gutting of thought, dripping down. Especially, the first two lines stand alone I think.
There's almost a gothic feel to it.

Ray

poemagraphic

Thu 29th Nov 2018 22:49

Hi John

It is and I don't. care to elaborate?

Candlesque Brill!

Thanks for being a wick ;)

Po

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John Marks

Thu 29th Nov 2018 22:11

Your name isn't Po. Not if you come from anywhere near Downham Market.

Many a candle has shed a lonesome tear

At the sound of a quill

Candlesque!

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