A stich in time

A stich in time

 

Married on the first day she became a teen

Shattering this little girls wondrous dreams

Some intimate stitch work concealing the truth

If only it was that simple, to suture back youth.

 

                                                                    Po

◄ Parts of me

It's all in my head ►

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poemagraphic

Fri 30th Nov 2018 22:47

That was exactly my intention Ray you are dead right my friend

Sometimes I wonder if I am too subtle. Not here though!

Thank you

Po

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raypool

Fri 30th Nov 2018 22:27

Very imaginative, hovering around reality without touching it exactly, if that makes sense Po.

Ray

poemagraphic

Thu 29th Nov 2018 20:08

I thought you might appreciate this... with a name like Taylor!

A subject matter that is little talked about.

A stitch in time you might say.

Thanks T

Po

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 29th Nov 2018 19:37

Really clever piece enjoyed this little gem. 💕

poemagraphic

Thu 29th Nov 2018 17:01

Just in from a hard day, and over the moon to see the likes this little Quatrain has received.

Thanks also to Steve, Dave, Keith, Brian and Anya.

You all are so supportive.

poemagraphic

Thu 29th Nov 2018 16:47

I had to go without my tea to write this

Hi big guy, you Wily old fox.
How are you feeling old friend?

Big Sal

Thu 29th Nov 2018 13:13

You sly dog. I didn't get the title until I re-read it twice.

Regardless, the brevity is more than made up for by the substance.💪

poemagraphic

Thu 29th Nov 2018 08:06

Thank you Don

I woke up this morning with this in my head
I hadn't even got out of bed!

That happens at times

Po

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Don Matthews

Thu 29th Nov 2018 07:30

Clever Po 😎

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