For It Was Autumn

For it was Autumn

Most of the year behind us.

A summer wasted

As summers often are.

Golden and green and amber,

The sudden chill,

Though sunlit mornings still

And timeless afternoons.

I suddenly recalled a kind word,

The arms that opened just upon seeing me.

That giant moment of indecision finally settled.

And there we were . . . together.

Uncertain life,

Uncertain weather.

Subtle change and recognition,

Kinship.

A walk across a golden path,

An understood silence,

Two hearts in harmony,

Maybe for the first and last,

For it was Autumn then,

And like nature,

The moment passed.

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Jon

Fri 18th Jan 2019 17:26

Hannah

So descriptive and richly imagined and expressed, ending, for me, with a touch of melancholy.

Lovely

Jon

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Sun 11th Nov 2018 17:38

A beautiful piece! Thank you Hannah
Bruce

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Peter Taylor

Thu 1st Nov 2018 17:08

Really lovely poem, Hannah. It really captures the extraordinary beauty of ordinary things that happen to us and make us realise that life can be richer than can be described. Well done indeed.

Peter T

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 31st Oct 2018 15:48

Evocative of a favourite song "Autumn Leaves". Nice work.

jennifer Malden

Wed 31st Oct 2018 15:31

Beautiful as usual, Hannah. Agree completely with Graham.
Full of meaning and really poignant.

Jennifer

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Rose Casserley

Wed 31st Oct 2018 12:36

I absolutely adored the feeling of dreaminess in this piece Hannah. First class!






Rose 💋

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 31st Oct 2018 11:24

there are two things that stick out for me in this lovely poem. How summer is often wasted due to us feeling that it is a longer season than the others (it's actually not). Secondly the transient nature of our affections mimicking the seasonal breakdown and eventual decay of Autumn.

I'm going to say it again. this is your best poem to date (I think). How you've come on HC.

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Hannah Collins

Wed 31st Oct 2018 09:13

Love your comment Tim.

Thank you so much dear Anya.

Hannah

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Tom Doolan

Wed 31st Oct 2018 08:58

I have FALLen for this one. Nice work Hannah. T 😀

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Hannah Collins

Tue 30th Oct 2018 22:24

Thank you for that wonderful comment Keith.

Hannah

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keith jeffries

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:42

Hannah,

An intermingling of nature and humanity beautifully blended. The fleeting changes of life articulated with skill.

Thank you for this.

Keith

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Hannah Collins

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:33

Thank you Taylor.
Loving your work.

Hannah

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:30

Beautiful Hannah..💕

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