Natural bride

Happier and happier by day by night

to repeat my betrothals 

to the Sun to the Moon

 

golden and silver encircling my heart

their tendrils of warmth and tranquillity.

With these rings am I wed to each of thee again.

 

Come then once more

witness my thankful vows

you ever attentive wedding guests

 

that bless the air

that glorifies the depths of oceans 

or flourish in verdurous and petalled beauty

 

hear my proclamation to the world

that in these coming days and nights

I shall live in gratefulness to,

and in recognition of, having been for so long

a spiritual wife

to both of life's essential, enhancing husbands.   

◄ deadly disconnection

considering reincarnation ►

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Rose Casserley

Thu 20th Sep 2018 10:49

comments and likes far beyond my expectations folks! So,
instead of repaying you guys with just the words
-thank you all so much,

Keith
Anya
Dazzer
Trev
Big Sal
Taylor
Martin
Kate G.
Jon

-I will dedicate and in doing so hope my next poem gives you all a laugh and adds to my gratitude for all your comments and likes.



Rose 💋

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Kate G

Thu 20th Sep 2018 05:33

Gorgeous Rose.

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Martin Elder

Wed 19th Sep 2018 22:52

I agree with Anya WOW! Rose you have excelled yourself here this must be your best yet.
Fabulous use of words.

Nice one girl

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 19th Sep 2018 16:35

I agree with all the comments Rose an exceptional poem beautifully haunting. Thank you 💕

Big Sal

Wed 19th Sep 2018 15:11

I promised my wife our vow renewal ceremonies would progressively get better than our wedding until she could get the day she had always wanted. In hindsight, I may have bit off more than I could chew. Oh well. Shit happens when you party naked!

Great piece Rose.👍

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 19th Sep 2018 14:50

... and the stars look on as witness. Had to read this one two or three times Rose. Lovely.

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Darren J Beaney

Wed 19th Sep 2018 14:19

Love it Rose, a bit sentimental, a bit haunting, a bit what if...

Cheers

DJB

Anya

Wed 19th Sep 2018 14:11

Wow! 😘

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keith jeffries

Wed 19th Sep 2018 12:58

Rose,
this is a superb poem, one of the best I have read in a long time. It merits being read over and over again to savour its beauty. Thank you
Keith

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