Cheer up, WTF is wrong with you?


Devoid of any empathy

they cut down the hanging man


Rejoicing in their righteousness

as only the righteous can


“Be happy and be carefree

be jolly just because”


Then “whoops” came their apocalypse

now they’re miserable like us


You see it isn’t just the magnitude

of events that bring’s you low


It’s the way that we disperse them

and the routes they take to go


So next time when with passing shrug

you say “just sort it out”


maybe pause a moment

to speak instead of shout


◄ Go West Old Men

Voiding urine upon a memory ►


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Wolfgar Miere

Wed 19th Sep 2018 09:21

Thanks again Hazel,

good to see you around although I have been off here for a few days also.

All the best,


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Hazel ettridge

Tue 18th Sep 2018 18:08

Another gem.

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Wolfgar Miere

Tue 18th Sep 2018 07:44

Thanks Taylor, Martin and Stu.

I've been taking a break and doing some work for a few days, good for the soul apparently.

Hope to be scribbling again soon.

Thanks again,


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Stu Buck

Mon 17th Sep 2018 11:10

love the theme mate and well written as usual.

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Sep 2018 22:28

Those opening words are for me fantastic. A wonderful poem in its examination of human moods.
Nicely put david

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 12th Sep 2018 18:23

I liked the poem very much..and also your later addition to it.
I agree wholeheartedly that we should not compare or dismiss others woes.
We do not know what is behind their actions we do not know their circumstances. It is difficult but if we can look beyond our own problems we can perhaps become more empathetic, less judgemental. Thank you

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Wolfgar Miere

Wed 12th Sep 2018 16:33

Thanks DJB, Jon and Don (welcome)

I don't want to get into this too deep (relief all around I sense) just to say, we should not measure peoples moods either joyful or depressive against the actions which make them so, to do so may in fact be irrational when we consider how individual we all are.

It worries me when people dismiss the woes of others as trivial in comparison to their own or even those of third parties (I too am guilty of this, I try to check myself)

People experience trauma and depression due to a plethora of happenings, none of which are insignificant to them.


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donovan wilson

Wed 12th Sep 2018 12:14

Enjoyed this,



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Jon Stainsby

Wed 12th Sep 2018 10:54

I agree.



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Darren J Beaney

Wed 12th Sep 2018 10:46

Another set of brilliant words and great recital.

Not sure if I have got this one, but if I have then I applaud it, and if I haven't - well I still applaud it as it sounds good and reads better!



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