Overcoming and Thriving (Poem)

Without mountains to shake us deep,

We are merely sheep wondering in the field, 

Merely existing but not living, 

On flat ground as we wonder around. 

No opportunities to strive for,

No burning desire to reach for,

No journey, 

Merely existing, wondering around,

With no desire to strive for.

We condemn what unfolds the journey,

And condemn what creates triumph,

In this extravagant world

Of ups, downs 

Falls, and triumph.

Let’s not forget 

That all,

Creates the journey

The destiny,

A new awareness 

Of it all.



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Martin Elder

Wed 1st Aug 2018 21:46

The journey is the important element Danny and we never stop learning no matter how old you get.
nice one

<Deleted User> (19836)

Wed 1st Aug 2018 18:02

I like your poem. It carries a vital message. Well done!😊

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Wed 1st Aug 2018 16:41

Beautiful . Enjoyed a lot.

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