An Apple Leaf

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Her

First glance

Round brown eyes

Following the every long shadow of day

He

Was never too far away

 

Tangled

Twisting

Tissue of lies

 

Sighs that numb the inner heart

 

Bruise feelings

 Reeling spinning

 Yesterdays

Long gone

 Lost

 

 

Love

So well remembered

Lays broken

 Forgotten

Into her pillow

Words

Unspoken

 

Oh!

 Yesterday

 

Curling overedged

Brown

 

 Brittle

 

Dreams that shrivel

An

Apple leaf

 Trembling

Aside the fruit

‘neath

 

The shimmering heat of long summer days

 

love

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John Aikman

Wed 30th Dec 2009 18:48

I think the kernel of this could be a lovely poem.

I am going to take the almighty liberty of e-mailing you privately a couple of suggestions. I personally love it when other poets take the time to make suggestions for improvements to my stuff...I don't have to take any notice after all...but at least it shows they care, have read it, and are interested.

I care...have read it...and am interested.

Nice one.

Thank you.

Jx

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Francine

Wed 30th Dec 2009 18:08

Exquisite, Augusta Darling...

'Love
So well remembered
Lays broken
Forgotten
Into her pillow
Words
Unspoken'

You know passion well ; )

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