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We are stars wrapped in skin the light we are seeking has always been within ? 

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Phillip Kelly

Thu 31st May 2018 00:00

Love the writing of this poem..... But can i suggest new structure???

We are stars

wrapped in skin

the light we are seeking

has always been

( and will always be))

within
.
?

<Deleted User> (19421)

Tue 29th May 2018 08:32

Short and sweet - simple, but lovely!

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