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not totally deflowered by technology

no addictive internet here

a cellphone here another one there

the occasional motor vehicle passing by

cattle bells ringing in the distance

the village cocks exchanging greetings

doves cooing up there in the trees

voices broadcasting news from out there

voices whimpering under the rock of exile

these thoughts yearning to find expression

dying to reach out to others out there

◄ out of grim necessity

giving birth ►


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Jeff Dawson

Sat 26th Dec 2009 11:28

Hi Jabulani, good to see you on writoutloud, just read a few and like your work, look forward to more, best wishes Jeff

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Tue 8th Dec 2009 01:21

Jabulani, i got to say, another nice piece of work from you here. i have experienced the simple village life, but not to any great detail. i think that you can find more comfort and worthwhile company, living in simple conditions, that the loneliness of modern day living where u are surrounded by ineffectual items that only add to ones isolation. stay well


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Fri 4th Dec 2009 20:36

if it is enough to say thanks so let it be.thanks for keeping me company on this solitary journey!

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jane wilcock

Fri 4th Dec 2009 15:46

this is good, i like thevillage cocks exchange greetings: greetings to you from me by the way, hope to read more.

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