Hand to Mouth Haiku

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Turn hand to all things,

such as a Salad Nicoise

feeds, biting the hand.

 

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<Deleted User> (6292)

Mon 30th Nov 2009 16:54

How diligent and observant you are Isobel, of course I was utilising the stresses rather than the syllables, ( I'm fibbing)

A king’s ransom spent on my education too…

I have made amends.

Thank you.
Augusta X

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Andy N

Mon 30th Nov 2009 14:02

how about a manchester haiku also (ain't gonna try and do such a good job like Isobel although)... Did enjoy this seriously however..

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Isobel

Sun 29th Nov 2009 09:52

I suppose we could turn it into a Northern haiku.

Turn a hand to owt
Such as a juicy meat pie
scoffs, biting the hand

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Isobel

Sun 29th Nov 2009 00:22

This is indeed hand to mouth haiku. I think you are one syllable too long on your first line. Sorry about all that rubbish I wrote last night - for some reason I thought Winston had written this...

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