womb passenger

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Listening

to loving tones

of Mother's voice

beyond her wall of flesh

slumbering your way into the world.

 

So many dreams and opportunities await

arranging themselves in ranks of readiness

for your arrival for your selectiveness

 

each one holding hands with time

the unwanted turncoat intent on withering

the opening flowers of your days. 

 

◄ and still he gets in loves way

as good as they come if not better ( for Jemima ) ►

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Rose Casserley

Thu 1st Mar 2018 14:15

thank's very much all.
Have gone with your joint suggestion grampsies and Jems.

Natalie while being appreciative of your comment I'm hoping things pick up for you asap-defo!

And cheers to you as well Desmond.



Rose 💋 ( 👍 Natalie )

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LEON STOLGARD

Tue 27th Feb 2018 18:59

brilliant!

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Jemima Jones

Sat 24th Feb 2018 14:06

oh! so sweet Rose so sweet! please pardon me if in agreeing with Patricia and Stefan regarding the last line I think the easiest option is just to change 'roses' for 'flowers' maybe?
such a lovely poem! Thank you. Jemima.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Sat 24th Feb 2018 08:54

really really beautiful Rose but perhaps 'polish' the last line up a little bit?

P&S xx

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