Sophomore sky!


In            flocks

Silvery light

                    From a sophomore sky


An autumnal phenomenon

It was for her


Or mine

           The light



Like the light that comes after a thunderstorm

Ozone, that was it

And still

            the light

And still

            the starlings

Why? Who knows?

Sophomore sky!

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Brian Maryon

Wed 21st Feb 2018 11:22

Okay Colin. Thanks for 'liking' it anyway.

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Wed 21st Feb 2018 11:02

yeah I know. It was fairly obvious. Which is why I left the comment.

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Brian Maryon

Wed 21st Feb 2018 10:56

Colin I had no reason for breaking up my work as I did. It was completely random. I just wrote down the first things that came into my head. What the hell is a sophomore sky anyway? The whole thing took 3 minutes and minimal effort.

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Wed 21st Feb 2018 08:23

for the same reason that Chris Armstrong gave to your questioning of his use of the broken line structure in his poem 'Aberystwyth Scenes, 1970'

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Brian Maryon

Tue 20th Feb 2018 22:25

Do you Colin...why?

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 20th Feb 2018 20:01

I like the broken lines Brian.

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