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I looked for you today,. 

and it was cold, 

I would have liked to have snuggled up 

With you in your jacket 

and it was like losing you

all over again 

You not being there 

and I felt strangely empty 

But I must not be selfish 

and should see things from your view 

and try to be a friend to you

It's just this ache in me. 

That only you can fill 

But I must try to complete myself 

For it is not your job to do this 

I want to walk hills and beaches with you 

and to have so much fun 

But today I waited and you didn't come 

and I wanted to cry 

all over again.  

◄ Realities

Angel ►

Comments

Nicola Beckett

Thu 7th Dec 2017 20:26

Thank you Jemima for the compliment ie) beautiful, and no he didn't come back and is with someone else now, but such is life and all events make sense eventually.
Thank you Patrick, I promise to keep writing xxx ?

Jemima Jones

Thu 7th Dec 2017 19:01

so where was he,Nicola? and did he ever come back? if not remember for someone as beautiful as you there are plenty more fish in the sea and probably more trustworthy. Well written and so heartfelt. Thank you.Jemima.


<Deleted User> (16099)

Thu 7th Dec 2017 18:21

tough spot to be in no doubt about that, continue to write and eventually I promise your thoughts and feelings will turn into something else....

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