Haiku Hike

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out hiking today

this trowel pointed the way

cementing my route

 

 

 

 

 

words and pictures ©Colin Hill 2017

 

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Colin Hill

Tue 14th Nov 2017 18:42

Graham, I'm thinking there might be something in your haiku advertising idea - like those Nationwide ads.

Rob, a compliment indeed from the haiku grand master. If it wasn't for you I probably wouldn't have got into them in the first place.

thank you both for stopping by. Col.

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Robert Mann

Tue 14th Nov 2017 11:16

Colin - well worth a chuckle or two! Syllable sorcery at play.
Rob

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 14th Nov 2017 10:25

Probably should have called this B&Q Haiku!

Clever stuff Colin

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Colin Hill

Tue 14th Nov 2017 07:50

nice to see the humble haiku getting lots of comments and likes - thank you all. If you stare at them long enough they start talking back.

Suki that's brilliant - like a line from one of your poems - a future poem perhaps?

Col.

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suki spangles

Tue 14th Nov 2017 01:24

Hi there Col,

As Amazon would say:

People who enjoyed this haiku also bought a book of building site puns..

Suki

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David Taylor-Jones

Mon 13th Nov 2017 22:39

Perfect, good work Colin

Martin Elder

Mon 13th Nov 2017 21:51

You clever clogs. marvellous stuff Col

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Colin Hill

Mon 13th Nov 2017 19:32

glad you liked this Kealan. We were passing through a very muddy and rundown farm and wondering whether we were on the right footpath when we came across The Trowel.

there is a pun in the second line too as 'pointing' is 'the action of filling the joints of brickwork or masonry with mortar'. Yeah I know, these little jokes make me giggle!

cheers, Col.

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kealan coady

Mon 13th Nov 2017 18:17

Love the pun in the last line. I'm a suckered for wordplay. However there was also a nice depth to this, as if nature herself was inviting you on a little journey. A short sweet read. Nice one buddy

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