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Mountains

Meet me in the mountains, 

where the two rivers meet, 

and the wind calls our names, 

not all is what it seems, 

I need you now,  

To listen to me 

and to teach me, 

Talk to me, 

There is so much I want to hear from you.  

If there is a field, 

where hurts are gone 

and no words spoken.  

Then how do I find it and you.  

Where is the map. 

Show me the way. 

 

◄ Crazy Diamond

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Tia Lattanzio

Sun 12th Nov 2017 19:02

There is a sense of urgency in this that I think is very fitting. I love the way that it captures the reader's attention throughout. It is gentle and sweet and full of longing, nicely done!
Regards, Tia

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