the dream cut loose

made to withdraw

in a state of argumentative woundedness

from the verbal battlefields of soured love 


the depths of its value poured away

an expelling from and disassociation with the soul's sustenance

integrated into a foreign strangeness

painfully woven into the fabric of loneliness


while unwantedly hearing every door

that you hoped could be reopened  for prodigal repatriation to lost love

being closed behind you




◄ belated realizations about my Father

love rat-love rut ►


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Jemima Jones

Tue 28th Nov 2017 14:24

Desmond Leon Rose Patricia Stefan you are all so kind.Thank you.Jemima.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Thu 16th Nov 2017 14:23

no matter how hard we might try Jemima we could not fault this fabulous poem.Beautiful piece of work.

P&S xx

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Rose Casserley

Sun 12th Nov 2017 10:57

J.J. this one really kicked me in the guts-ACE!

Rose 💋

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Fri 10th Nov 2017 19:36

such a well constructed piece Jemima.Flows fabulously!

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