of a suicide

 

 

like the companionship of roses

but dewed with human tears

they gather around the thorniness of the deed,

the sad forced departure

trying so hard to glean something from the loss

able to create even a small and kindly glow

 

as their minds struggle

to permeate

the unexpected dark event

answers unsettled,forsaking.

 

This was an ordered death.

 

Will come

the softening,easing flowers

to slowly grow in the gardens of comfort

among these cold grave stoned days

 

when peace will enter into this dereliction

bringing its every soothing aspect

to strengthen and enable their sorrows enough

to accept this unwanted gift

 

that they may be cleansed of pain

allowed to depart the torturous altar

of anguish,misery and regret

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Jemima Jones

Thu 9th Nov 2017 10:06

it isn't personal jennifer but nevertheless I appreciate your concerns had it been.Your use of the words "incomprehension of those left behind" are so very apt along with Hannahs's "the language of grief and loss" I thank you both.Jemima.

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Hannah Collins

Tue 7th Nov 2017 20:39

Very moving, the language of grief and loss.
The last verse especially memorable.
A poem to remember.

Hannah

jennifer Malden

Tue 7th Nov 2017 11:47

Very moving and expresses the distress and incomprension of those left behind. As others say, I hope this wasn't someone near to you.

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Jemima Jones

Tue 7th Nov 2017 10:40

Nicola really appreciated your concern for my well-being and I'm so sorry for the upset caused by your losing someone who for whatever reason felt the need to carry out this terrible kind of act which he saw as an only solution to his problems.It is with gratefulness Cynthia that I can tell you this poem isn't personal.'This was an ordered death' I felt carried the weightiest of determination.Leon Patricia, and Stefan, I repeat my appreciation to the three of you also for your concerns and Justine for liking.Thank you all.Jemima.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Sat 4th Nov 2017 22:14

Jemima,if this very moving piece is of a personal nature and you need someone to talk to then remember we two old duffers are always here for you.


P&S xx

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LEON STOLGARD

Sat 4th Nov 2017 16:44

very powerful Jemima.I'm hoping this isn't personal.If it is then you have my sincere condolences

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 3rd Nov 2017 20:55

It's impossible to know whether this is a personal experience. Regardless, you have captured well the emotional struggle of the persons surrounding such an event as suicide, and the need for release from sorrow.

'This was an ordered death' is hugely enigmatic. It could mean almost any one of three or four possibilities, probably 'intent' but also including 'destiny' etc.

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Nicola Beckett

Fri 3rd Nov 2017 19:35

Very sad, I hope u r well. Somebody I knew ended there life this year, it's a loss and although I didn't know him well it upset me all the same xx

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