beyond sex

this morning

everything rests in

bouquets of sultry satisfaction.

 

Your dawn brightened smile

your naked swarthiness,

both guilty

of being adorable

 

and how much last nights first story

I hung onto

told me that with you

fun and laughter are not shy strangers

they live uncaged in the crazy beautiful world

that is your heart  

 

yet as I watch you dress to leave

I am wondering how many underlying secrets

might repose inside you?

 

if by chance there happens to be one

that instils in your mind

the fear of never finding real love

 

somehow I will teach you to understand

that when the deep hunger

of your true needs rushes you

be still,

remember,

waiting here for you

is my soul's cradle

🌷 (5)

◄ in his silence

the allowance of breath is........ ►

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Rose Casserley

Mon 6th Nov 2017 19:15

there is Leon it probably goes by many names compassion being one of them.

Jems, always nice to hear from you babe

Rob welcome back into the fold of friendship...😘
I agree with your suggested amendment and am touched by your soulful awareness

P&S ayup! luvyas!

220 welcome! appreciated.



Rose 💋

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220August

Mon 6th Nov 2017 15:04

"waiting here for you is my soul's cradle" . Nice!

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Sat 4th Nov 2017 22:48

boy! do we so much agree with Rob's comments!
Fantastic Rose.


P&S xx

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Robert Mann

Fri 3rd Nov 2017 17:25

Rose - best piece I've seen you write in ages, because there is a large element of you between the lines. The old adage of 'write what you know' should be amended to 'write what you know, feel, desire and need'. Job well done in this instance.
Rob

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Jemima Jones

Fri 3rd Nov 2017 15:50

Lovely imagery here Rose.Beautiful.Thank you.Jemima.

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LEON STOLGARD

Fri 3rd Nov 2017 15:29

there just has to be such a place.Yet another stonker from the Casserley camp.

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Rose Casserley

Wed 1st Nov 2017 21:29

Martin my hands are raised-guilty as charged! 😏 you've soo got me sussed 😁

Tom,Jeff,Andy consider your likings well appreciated




Rose 💋

Martin Elder

Mon 30th Oct 2017 22:17

I like this not least because it is a good poem but also there is I suspect something of you here Rose beneath the acerbic veneer that I have grown to love there is this tender side showing. and it is beautiful.
Maybe I am being a bit to mushy but either way it's lovely
nice one girl

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