Love Me Until the Morning

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Love me until the morning

 

Love me through the easel and canvas of your day

Love me to your everywhere

Love me into the singsong of your smile

Treasure my moments

Moments of madness

Given up like a child

Love me through my kissing

Kisses that fall to you like mist stingle hangs upon a leaf

Kisses like two swans upon still water

Wear me close to your dream

Watch the which way of my going

 

Love me until the morning 

 

WOLOP.nov

◄ Cold Edge of Morning

Four Ways Five ►

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 11th Dec 2009 09:49

A lovely poem Augusta, a well deserved WOLOP! Just adore "love me through the easel and canvas of your day". I also like the look of all your poems on the page, you obviously take a lot of care re font/size and image. So, a beautiful read. x
P.S. your date/rape poem did not shock me, I found it complex and moving. Like sex, I guess. I don't know why it attracted such vitriolic comments from some people. And I thought your replies were both strong and polite.

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 8th Dec 2009 20:35

Quite beautiful Augusta, love it, Jeff X

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Isobel

Mon 7th Dec 2009 14:16

Please could you tag this poem with WOLOP.nov so that people can view it as a group. Thanks

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Chris Dawson

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 21:39

Beautiful, love it.
Cx

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Andy N

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 14:01

is it just me or does that have a lovely song like quality to it too? love it

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 21:50

Beautiful -I feel better now, thanks.

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jane wilcock

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 20:53

aawwww..lovely!

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Dave Bradley

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 18:25

hadn't planned on logging on but had to, to say how much I liked this. It captures the extravagance of love beautifully

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Isobel

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 17:37

Nice to see someone tackle a good old fashioned love poem. So few people seem to embrace them nowadays - it's all love tainted, love lost or love gone wrong - I wonder why? There is also a lot to be said for being loved until the morning - a bit of a contrast to the Cold Edge of Morning, Augusta. Never heard of the word stingle before - but it sounds lovely in that context - I think I shall adopt it....

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Ros

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 16:20

Oh Augusta this is so beautiful ... it has left me feeling really emotional .. i absolutely love it.. you are a very perceptive and wonderful writer.
Ros x

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owen calvert

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 14:43

fantastic imagery, nice write!

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