lost babie's

little broken fledgeling's

having taken their damaged wings

to be repaired by

and fly forever in

the company of angels

◄ tonight again the tumult

betterment ►

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Jemima Jones

Thu 29th Jun 2017 21:15

many thanks Patricia and Stefan.Jemima.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Thu 29th Jun 2017 00:16

really moving piece J.J.

P&S xx

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Jemima Jones

Mon 26th Jun 2017 10:13

thank you Patricia and KJ(wow! such a comment!)This poem was inspired by my first visit to an old neighbours grave,and while there noticed the special plot assigned for these poor little soul's.I have altered the first line,since I overlooked the obvious description of these children being fledgeling's rather than bird's as such,since that may have
suggested them being somewhat older.Thank you.Jemima.

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kJ Walker

Sun 25th Jun 2017 19:41

I really liked this, it had a gentleness that runs through all of your poems. you have an ability to stamp your own personality onto your work, I take my hat off to you.

Cheers Kevin

patricia Hughes

Sun 25th Jun 2017 13:07

Beautiful.

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Jemima Jones

Sun 25th Jun 2017 11:57

and in yours too without any doubt Raj.Thank you.Jemima.

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Raj Ferds

Sun 25th Jun 2017 11:52

That's beautiful Jem. There's a corner in your heart that has a endless reserve of these beauties.

Raj

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Jemima Jones

Sun 25th Jun 2017 11:41

thank you very much Rose.Jemima.

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Rose Casserley

Sun 25th Jun 2017 11:39

awwww!-sweet babe!


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