earth out of control to Major God

if you are listening J.C.

can't you bring the date of your second coming forward,

and come down from those great height's,and help humanity?


All you need do,so as not to get mobbed by autograph hunter's,

is assume another identity.

Its obvious that you would need to ditch the white robe,long hair and beard.


You see,my revered ideal idol,

having believed in you for centurie's,don't you think we deserve a little payback?

if and when you have beamed down,

you could do something like repeating that water to wine trick,but an updated version maybe?


Perhaps turn every killing device into implement's of peace,or,

maybe delete the meaning of hatred and reboot the meaning of love?


I do understand,divine one,that heaven might not have been able

to recieve a Wi-Fi signal

so perhaps that is why we never see you on Skype

or get your replie's to our emails.


It is  isn't it?


also dude...sorry....diety,

as to the human identity you may decide to assume;

don't choose one that is involved in politic's,because,

that will get you nowhere

which is exactly where we are thanks to the likes of those feet dragging fool's.


maybe choose on along the lines of a shakesperian actor for example?

in that way,you could play the role's of other god's too.

And thereby,

please all of the people,all of the time

forever and ever


ps-off to take my sincere pill's and put my helmet on.

see you soon-I HOPE!

◄ out with the darkness

come reincarnation (for my good friend Raj) ►


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Rose Casserley

Thu 22nd Jun 2017 17:16

ta Grampsies!

Rose 💋💋

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Tue 20th Jun 2017 20:32

clever/nice piece of black comedy kiddo.

P&S x

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Rose Casserley

Tue 20th Jun 2017 00:46

we do indeed Raj.
Appreciate your appraisal my friend.

Cynthia,I,write,in,the, same,way,that,I,speak,sloooowly!


seriously though,we have been here before re apostrophe's/apostrophes
and you kindly advised me then to leave all forms of punctuation out in future.

Unfortunately,old habits/habit's die hard.

Jems,nothing serious I hope? speak later.

Many thanks all

Rose 💋💋💋

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Jemima Jones

Mon 19th Jun 2017 23:34

just to quickly say,I was going to post a poem tonight,but something has turned up that has diverted my intention of doing so.In the meantime Rose I wouldn't have logged off before saying that I think this poem really is a powerfully humorous piece.Thank you.Jemima.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 19th Jun 2017 15:24

Very clever idea. Much enjoyed.

Are you deliberately taking the piss with apostrophes? It began to be so funny, they nearly swamped the message. Or maybe they enhanced it. Not sure.

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Raj Ferds

Mon 19th Jun 2017 11:20

We need him NOW Rose.

These two lines say it all:
Perhaps turn every killing device into implement's of peace,or, maybe delete the meaning of hatred and reboot the meaning of love?

Has our hurting world lost its ability to communicate peacefully? Can we give Dialogue a chance to replace Death.

Powerful piece.
Raj x

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