His breath brings warmth
upon my skin.
A sensual kiss,
stopping only to smile.
He grins at me
while he pleases.
Knowing just one is
never enough,
his lavish kisses sweep
further down
my feverish flesh.
Staring wildly at
me while he teases.
He lashes his tongue
against my wet walls.
I moan wildly
then
I succumb
and I fall.
He lures me to my knees.
Endorse appreciative comments...a terse and tense exploration of an erotic encounter. Hard to resist!
Thanks for the link to your old post Emer. Enjoyed that.
I can describe it in 3 words: poetic, erotic, enigmatic.
Perhaps real sexiness comes from delving deeper, exploring (and exploiting) those undiscovered places within your mind with unbridled emotion. No holding back!
Let's say one sexy poem has another simmering inside you.
Raj
Haha 😂 I remember your 'Kissing the lips of the sea' piece Paul. It was well written. I really like romantic/erotic writing.. I'm not a big fan of the vulgar stuff. 👎
Emer, you very kindly wrote that my poem 'Kissing the Lips of the Sea' had something very sexy about it. Let me just say that if that was sexy then this (lovely) poem is saucier and sexier than a coachload of strippers 😂😂
I enjoyed this very much Emer.
Paul
Thanks Raj, I will try!! This is an old posting from me, I tried to be mysteriously sexy at some point last year😗
https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=53795
As they say practice makes perfect. Hey you can only get better. Seems like you were holding back??
Keep them coming!!!!!!
Raj
Much too shy to add audio to this one 😚
haha! nice one! for a first attempt I think you nailed it - okay, enough of the galvanised jokes already - btw, will you be adding an audio version? 😉 Have a nice day Emer 😃
Thanks Colin, my first attempt at sexy writing😁😁😁 It was on my bucket list .. Sorry, I just used the 'B' word 😱
great title and sexy writing and not a word about buckets. Enjoyed.
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Emer Ni Chorra
Sat 18th Feb 2017 23:35
Thank you so much M. C. Comments are much appreciated, they are encouraging. 👍
Raj, I agree.. The mind is a very sexy place indeed.. And who knows, maybe there is another erotic piece simmering slowly in there awaiting freedom? Time will tell.. Me hold back? Never 🤔 😂 😂 😂