Galvanize

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His breath brings warmth

upon my skin.

 

A sensual kiss,

stopping only to smile.

He grins at me

while he pleases.

 

Knowing just one is

never enough,

his lavish kisses sweep

further down

my feverish flesh.

 

Staring wildly at

me while he teases.

He lashes his tongue

against my wet walls.

 

I moan wildly

then

I  succumb 

and I fall.

 

He lures me to my knees.

 

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Emer Ni Chorra

Sat 18th Feb 2017 23:35

Thank you so much M. C. Comments are much appreciated, they are encouraging. 👍

Raj, I agree.. The mind is a very sexy place indeed.. And who knows, maybe there is another erotic piece simmering slowly in there awaiting freedom? Time will tell.. Me hold back? Never 🤔 😂 😂 😂

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 18th Feb 2017 18:52

Endorse appreciative comments...a terse and tense exploration of an erotic encounter. Hard to resist!

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Raj Ferds

Sat 18th Feb 2017 07:06

Thanks for the link to your old post Emer. Enjoyed that.
I can describe it in 3 words: poetic, erotic, enigmatic.

Perhaps real sexiness comes from delving deeper, exploring (and exploiting) those undiscovered places within your mind with unbridled emotion. No holding back!

Let's say one sexy poem has another simmering inside you.

Raj

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 17th Feb 2017 18:13

Haha 😂 I remember your 'Kissing the lips of the sea' piece Paul. It was well written. I really like romantic/erotic writing.. I'm not a big fan of the vulgar stuff. 👎

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Paul Waring

Fri 17th Feb 2017 18:02

Emer, you very kindly wrote that my poem 'Kissing the Lips of the Sea' had something very sexy about it. Let me just say that if that was sexy then this (lovely) poem is saucier and sexier than a coachload of strippers 😂😂

I enjoyed this very much Emer.

Paul

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 17th Feb 2017 17:06

Thanks Raj, I will try!! This is an old posting from me, I tried to be mysteriously sexy at some point last year😗

https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=53795

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Raj Ferds

Fri 17th Feb 2017 16:41

As they say practice makes perfect. Hey you can only get better. Seems like you were holding back??

Keep them coming!!!!!!

Raj

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 17th Feb 2017 14:57

Much too shy to add audio to this one 😚

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Colin Hill

Fri 17th Feb 2017 09:18

haha! nice one! for a first attempt I think you nailed it - okay, enough of the galvanised jokes already - btw, will you be adding an audio version? 😉 Have a nice day Emer 😃

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 17th Feb 2017 08:50

Thanks Colin, my first attempt at sexy writing😁😁😁 It was on my bucket list .. Sorry, I just used the 'B' word 😱

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Colin Hill

Fri 17th Feb 2017 08:14

great title and sexy writing and not a word about buckets. Enjoyed.

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