On snails

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A snail is a complex thing

when going out

its always in

 

It drags around its house of shell

so doesn't need

a door or bell

 

Its like some people I suppose

but unlike them

its burden shows

◄ Psithurism

Shatila 2017 ►

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Wolfgar Miere

Thu 19th Jan 2017 22:29

Thanks Andy,

from you that is praise indeed.

David.

Travis Brow

Thu 19th Jan 2017 15:35

Bingo! This is a great poem David.

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Wolfgar Miere

Thu 19th Jan 2017 00:33

Thanks Ray,

my Grandmother used to salt slugs and snails, pretty cruel in my book.

Thanks for reading and comments, hope you get your IT sorted soon.

David.

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raypool

Wed 18th Jan 2017 16:48

witty, wistful and nicely turned out David. A segment of truth in a nutshell. Very appealing and refreshing.
I put slug pellets once onto a pot and after seeing the destruction of snails I was ashamed and disgusted; the design of these creatures is a revelation of spiral physics.

Ray

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Wolfgar Miere

Wed 18th Jan 2017 09:48

Thanks for the link elP,

and yes, I did.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wSnghcGigzY

David.

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elPintor

Wed 18th Jan 2017 01:46

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R2F_hGwD26g

I hope you appreciate the symbolism in this as much as I did...

elP

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Wolfgar Miere

Tue 17th Jan 2017 21:18

Thanks all for your encouraging and generous comments.

Much appreciated,

David.

Gideon Puccio

Tue 17th Jan 2017 11:05

Great writing Wolfgar! Enjoyed it very much.

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Stu Buck

Tue 17th Jan 2017 10:57

an absolute belter david.

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Paul Waring

Tue 17th Jan 2017 10:55

Wolfgar, I like this poem very much, it's clever, funny and poignant. Great work! Paul

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