freeness

Sleeping,the greening awaits,that yes,

we have seen before,many times

but as always,it will freshly dissipate

sombre invasive remnants

of winters impostions.

 

As its youthful breath cloaks everything

hope is renewed.

 

Look! we shall say

the leafed tree's are back!

the land is unlocked!

 

A friend,returned,bearing liberating gift's

each one unwrapped,to reveal

a raised spirit.

 

◄ Life

Epitomy of importance ►

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 27th Apr 2017 12:08

I like the rhythm- the fact that it's not too regular, but regular enough to feel that I carried along by it.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 27th Apr 2017 12:07

I like the rhythm- the fact that it's not too regular, but regular enough to feel that I carried along by it.

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Jemima Jones

Thu 5th Jan 2017 17:28

First off,I would like to thank you Patricia,Stefan,Rose and Colin for all of your support in 2016 and wish you good health and happiness for the coming year.I hope I can continue to produce poems good enough for your approvals
Thank you for your comments on this poem as well.Jemima.

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Rose Casserley

Sat 31st Dec 2016 12:10

bring it on! eh Jems.Nice piece.All da best for 2017 girly.



Rose 💋

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Fri 30th Dec 2016 22:09

'freshly dissipate winters sombre invasive remnants' great descriptions Jemima.

P&S xx

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