Cumulous and Co.

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See how they beautifully congregate

embracing each other

in white silence


vapourous cathedrals

softest of mountains

in a floating by landscape


an ethereal endless armada

of everchanging shapes

drifting en masse

without destinations


weightless wandering vessels

sailing on a dry azured ocean.





© Patricia Wilde 27th December 2016

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Fri 30th Dec 2016 21:53

thanks so much Paul/Gideon/Jemima and Harry for comments and liking.

One could literally spend hours upon hours watching clouds shape shifting.Its slightly similar to looking into an open fire,and seeing changing images there too.


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Harry O'Neill

Thu 29th Dec 2016 23:06

Another beautiful one, Patricia.

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Jemima Jones

Wed 28th Dec 2016 17:58

My Patricia! you have certainly excelled in your writing skills with this gorgeous poem.I absolutely adore it! Thank you.Jemima.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Wed 28th Dec 2016 15:33

I thank you gentlemen very much indeed.


Gideon Puccio

Wed 28th Dec 2016 01:41

Excellent imagery. All the words stand out for me of course, but, I particularly love how "vapourous cathedrals..." reads in my mind. This whole poem made me smile both inside and out. Great work!

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Paul Waring

Tue 27th Dec 2016 19:05

Dear Patricia, this reads so beautifully...I particularly enjoyed your depiction of clouds in terms of earthly images. Best wishes, Paul

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Tue 27th Dec 2016 18:59

many thanks Paul.


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