restore to factory settings

while

abusing

real

time

having

fun

times

 

a

gradual

mishaping

added

itself

to

my

bodily

contours

 

I

became

breathless

in

ascending

even

the

slightest

gradient

 

energy

wound

down

as

age

wound 

up

 

a

stoop

began

to

make

its

home

on

my

back

 

then!

the

seed

of

enough

is

enough

germinated!

 

my

mind

ignited

a

fat

burning

fire

of

desire

 

to

climb

high

above

temptations

frustrations

self

condemnations

 

to

swim

length

upon

length

of

transformations

determinations

detoxifications

 

lift

the

weights

off

myself

of

deformations

invalidations

misappropriations

 

cycle

uphill

against

adversity

obesity

inactivity

 

run

backwards

through

the

old

me

to

success

redress

smaller

dress

 

and

finally

after

fat

burning

I

did

some

fucking

sofa

burning!

 

◄ BRRR-exiting!

disgustingly discarded ►

Comments

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Rose Casserley

Thu 15th Dec 2016 22:57

good advice Trev-wilco! P&S,only now you remind me!

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Jemima Jones

Thu 15th Dec 2016 16:51

Rose,would I be right in guessing that the way this poem is formatted,is to indicate the idea of 'slimming down?' If so-very clever! Thank you.Jemima.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Wed 14th Dec 2016 17:12

We thought you were looking slimmer Rose,in your new profile photo-good for you girl! Well done!

Just one thing-did you check down the side of the sofa before you burned it?-you may have missed out on the odd lost fiver,or,fruit pastille haha!

P&S.xx

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 13th Dec 2016 22:18

And
don't
forget
to
lock
the
fridge!

Nice, Rose.

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