Haiku: Fully Fledged

Children now grown up

Desolate windswept seashore

Abandoned castles

 

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Robert Mann

Thu 22nd Sep 2016 15:24

Ray - glad this struck the right tone. I thought it particularly pertinent in the week that 'young adults' are on their way to University.
Rob

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raypool

Wed 21st Sep 2016 19:50

Really good this one Rob. It contrasts future and past in a crisp way and is nicely poignant .

Ray

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