Haiku: L'amour

Hard breath jammed in throat

Pulsing heart gripped so tightly

Love is violence

◄ Haiku: Unreal

Haiku: Wretched ►

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Robert Mann

Sun 4th Sep 2016 20:56

Ray - thanks for the generous comments. I was thinking of new subject matter for my haiku when I remembered the old 'Love is......' generation of cartoon drawings and sayings. Think I might try a few along the same lines but with a more pithy slant. Glad you liked it.
Rob

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raypool

Sun 4th Sep 2016 15:36

A great intensity in this Rob. A different feel from the traditional eastern philosophy, but it packs a punch that I like ! You must be an expert by now on this format. Regards Ray

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