Atlantis

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Atlantis at last

On a boat bound for Geogia

They sailed through a turquoise sea,

 

And angels and demons 

Brought tempests and tides

And memories of life yet to be.

 

Starboard and windward

Both broken and free,

Patched sails and cold water

Stopped watches and dreams

 

Two sparrows soared flighted 

To an island of three,

Under fire and underwater

Lost love and lost me.

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Hallie Elle

Mon 5th Sep 2016 14:48

Thank you both 💕

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Martin Elder

Fri 2nd Sep 2016 17:56

I agree with Stu , couldn't have put it better myself.

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Stu Buck

Fri 2nd Sep 2016 15:51

this is beautifully written and has a lovely rhythm to it. great subject matter too. very good.

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