Goldie

 

Stretching behind the glass

In her knickers and bra

We feign ignorance

And ooze together

 

Raking through her auburn

With both hands

 

Twisting her neck

 

Her hips

 

The slut

 

Just for me

 

A half mad drop out

Drunk at 10am

With itchy five day growth

And the orange

Of his

Hospitalized neighbours fish  

Floating

Freshly dead

 

A good two minutes pass

 

Slipping my hand down

I push it to one side

And step back

 

Too much of a good thing

Is still a good thing

 

In the bathroom

I pour out the bowl

 

Take a piss

 

Before flushing

Another life away

 

All of this has got to stop

Right now

 

And It probably will do

 

Eventually.

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 17th May 2012 22:17

Mike hi-this bares a think- why 'slut', is that an indication of the narrator's anger as well as their 'frustration'? It has a disaffected charm with enough confusion to draw attention to the structure within which lays or is it lies(what am I saying?)How about 'it has an angry charm'?

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