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No-one understood his love for smoking,

The man swore on his life, with his life,

That he would never quit his ‘hobby’.

When asked ‘why do you love it?’

He explained that he was manipulating,

The smoke, as he blew out rings.

The man expressed a knowledge for

Cancer, but said he would take his chances,

Because smoking made him feel powerful.

In the autopsy, post-demise,

I swear to you, no lies,

His lungs were clearer than the skies,

In mid July.


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<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 4th Jan 2012 17:33

Ha! Now I read this when there were no replies and thought that maybe those last few lines were fibs in a 'would I lie to you' way.

I too enjoyed this.. :o)

<Deleted User> (8134)

Wed 4th Jan 2012 13:55

Thank you Laura! I love smoking too, it's a reflection of how I feel towards the addiction :)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 4th Jan 2012 13:52

Mmm I really like this. Feels original, and close to home for me. I LOVE smoking. Love the pic too.

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