JANINE AT THE SEA`S EDGE
Behind her was a width of land,
Before, a wider width of sea,
Between, a mile of flat, wet sand
Then a track foot-trod determinedly.
Until, skirt-tucked, flamingo-stanced,
She stood, delighted, chortling there,
While a million crinkling ripples danced
As the cheeky sea grinned back at her.
Bold-eyed, elemental, kin,
They haled each other, sight to sight,
Each the other drinking in
In a mutual exchange of light
Then – done – the parting, to the land,
Homing-ward, the long track trudging.
(All the way the jealous sand
Every single footstep grudging)
She: to fetch the light, the air,
The sea, to all the folk inland.
The sea: to break the news of her
Along the coasts………………
Of Casablanca, Carolina,
Sunny Cuba, India, China,
Indonesia, Mauritania,
Java, Yemen, Pennsylvania,
Argentina, Spain, Alaska,
Mozambique, and Madagascar.
A flip to far Franz Joseph Land,
Then home again to Wirral Sands.
POSTSCRIPT
The moon that midnight, stealthily,
Would`ve drawn a furtive sheet of sea
And kept the secret selfishly.
But the poet, dafted with the sight,
Sat up and scribbled all the night
And turned it into poetry.
Tag WOL comp
Martin Peacock
Tue 7th Feb 2012 14:05
Ola, and cheers ever so for your comments on 'Handful Of Dust', Harry. As for 'Janine At The Sea's Edge' - it scores right well with me. Just one minor cavil: a little rejigging of the punctuation would ease its flow tremendously - make a good poem a great one. And I loved the PS: '...the poet, dafted by the sight' is a line I may have to steal someday....