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Tigerella Warrior

 

 

he loves a stripey woman:

criss-cross pinkness  

ridged in parts,

running riptide on the skin of

a sinner full of scars

 

she loves a man of god who

kisses ribbons telling tales,

in faded brutal pale, of

a history containing all the

counting of the blessings by the strip

 

he traces the beginning mark:

a scar that’s warm and wet but

yet that no one else can see just

where a child born back to front

eased her way into the world

 

tigerella shows her book of life                         

where pages turn like leaves of gold

and winning, always winning

in a history of warfare and

hostility and birth

 

kitchen knife and cannula

razoring a labour

gave a tigerella warrior                                   

a skin of storied scars

and he kisses every one

 

 

 

 

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Barbi Touron

Sat 18th Feb 2012 02:54

Ooo, i just read the tomato part, wonderfully, Delicious!

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Barbi Touron

Sat 18th Feb 2012 02:53

Beautifully done, I have always been fascinated with scars and all the stories that they tell/do not tell. they are something so unique and perfectly beautiful. Wonderful poem

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 11th Jan 2012 11:40

Brilliant, Laura, top-class writing. If your reference to a breach birth is just academic, I stand amazed at your insight. I would never have used 'eased' though, more like 'ripped' for me.

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 15th Dec 2011 18:41

Some great lines here Laura, thanx for comment on heyday poem jeff x

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Andy N

Sun 11th Dec 2011 18:01

excellent, laura.. you really are on a good roll at the moment.. and this is first rate xx

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winston plowes

Sat 10th Dec 2011 23:38

I remember the thunder, thunder, thunder cats.

More seriously such strength in depth in this one of yours.

Nice to come back to it tonight.

H

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Fri 9th Dec 2011 16:59

- a scar that's warm and wet... ooh... me all horny :)
(oh and dont be put off by the likeness to George Clooney neither)

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Laura Taylor

Thu 8th Dec 2011 10:11

Haha Steve - thundercats! :D :D Cheers fella

Ray - oh noez, I must have missed that memo!! Probably bunking off at the time ;)

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Ray Miller

Wed 7th Dec 2011 23:03

I can't pretend to have much of a clue what this is all about, but I like some of the lines
a sinner full of scars and a faded brutal pale, for example. What I do know is that you ought to have a good reason to be ending lines on of, the, and - I can't see any.

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Rachel Bond

Wed 7th Dec 2011 12:44

think it was kitchen knife and razor did it.

do you mean scars inflicted through life?

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Laura Taylor

Wed 7th Dec 2011 12:33

Cheers Rach - I did wonder whether people would think it was about self harm. That was not my intention as the writer though. But as always, people are free to see what they see in the words.

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Rachel Bond

Wed 7th Dec 2011 10:52

he loves a stripey woman:

criss-cross pinkness

ridged in parts,

running riptide on the skin of

a sinner full of scars

i love this rhythm, i love the stripey woman image. like the use of i's and r's and the way it all tumbles almost carelessly into the ideas of guilt and self harm.
ive seen some pretty ugly scars on girls arms cut up to ribbons and sometimes they cut so deep down it s not the blood let that kills em but the scarring of themselves apart. i like the tiger/zebra wilderness images. some girls get stuck in cages like lions gnawing their own limbs.
great poem difficult theme

have just read about the tigerella tomato...now thats cheered me up , squish xx

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Laura Taylor

Wed 7th Dec 2011 10:13

Thank you ladies :)

Did you know that a tigerella is in fact a striped tomato? The 'fruit of love' :)

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Wed 7th Dec 2011 09:15



Laura,

That first verse blew me away, had to read it a few times and each time my smile widened.

Led on to a wonderful read full of survival of self, love and understanding..think this is top stuff..

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Francine

Wed 7th Dec 2011 03:40

The tale of a survivor!
Love the lines:

'she loves a man of god who
kisses ribbons telling tales'

'tigerella shows her book of life
where pages turn like leaves of gold'

'a skin of storied scars
and he kisses every one'

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Isobel

Tue 6th Dec 2011 21:20

I'd agree with Mrs Mediocre on this one - though it pains me to call her that.This seems like a very strong woman who has endured more than most - a very loved one also. Having your scars kissed is a beautiful image to end on.

Lizzie

Tue 6th Dec 2011 18:12

"Tigerella warrior"....."Ridged in parts"
I imagine this woman as incredibly strong, mentally and physically. I love it.

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