I had a blow up doll

she had lovely legs

one over here

one over there


damn -

it’s back to

the Hezbollah

dating agency again

◄ doggy style

put it in a sock ►


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Ray Miller

Sat 8th Oct 2011 22:25

Actually, the first four lines could stand alone but you'd need a different title. How's about Spread?

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Fri 7th Oct 2011 22:42

Overkill... suicide bombers... Love it Ray.
GSOH... oh gosh, I'll get over this dyslkisa if it likls me.
Clean & Discreet
& up my street...
(I think one knows more than is good for one)
I was going to say that the first stanza could stand alone... but not without any legs it couldnae...
Many Thanks. B

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Lynn Dye

Fri 7th Oct 2011 16:22

Well, I'm no expert, but I think it works better with both stanzas. Enjoyed this, Mr.B ;)

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Laura Taylor

Fri 7th Oct 2011 13:59

Good Sense of Humour - found a lot on dating sites Ray.

I would have thought 'clean and discreet' would be more up your street, banksy ;p

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Ray Miller

Fri 7th Oct 2011 12:59

I think just the first 4 lines would do. The rest is overkill. What's GSOH mean?

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