Afghanistan 74
Me , Polly Perkins and
Cheap Charlie Brown were
the vanguard in Afghanistan
back in seventy four,
we had a back flipper
called Ripper and
some belly dancing ladies
who came from Peru and
lot's of lovely hash.
Comments
I agree with Rachel - at least a second verse
this sounds like the opening paragraph of a really interesting novel...can you write more?
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bernard shelton
Thu 20th Jan 2011 19:05
Rachel, Philipos thank you both for your comments.
This was written as a 2 min wonder type thing,no thought of any more at the moment, but will try and think of something when I take my empty head off.