Afghanistan 74

Me , Polly Perkins and

Cheap Charlie Brown were

the vanguard in Afghanistan

back in seventy four,

we had a back flipper

called Ripper and

some belly dancing ladies

who came from Peru and

lot's of lovely hash.

◄ Brown Paper Bag

Skipping Stones ►

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bernard shelton

Thu 20th Jan 2011 19:05

Rachel, Philipos thank you both for your comments.

This was written as a 2 min wonder type thing,no thought of any more at the moment, but will try and think of something when I take my empty head off.

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Philipos

Wed 19th Jan 2011 20:11

I agree with Rachel - at least a second verse

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Rachel Bond

Wed 19th Jan 2011 17:30

this sounds like the opening paragraph of a really interesting novel...can you write more?

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